YuGiOh! Rate/fix my deck?

all i would say is add a few monster cards that will special summon or will summon tokens to the field a good example is dandylion or vile germ as both will give you extra monsters onto your field to be used in summoning your bigger hitters and NEVER EVER use god cards in a deck their summoning conditions usually mean that by the time you can summon it out its all too late. also get a good mix of monster and spell/trap destruction cards into your deck.